Brian Gorell's War

I love Brian Gorell, I do. I do.

I adore his writing style.

I pray that he will get his revenge, and his money,

But oftentimes, I wish he improves his grammar.

In one of his entries, he wrote:

This entry is very important to me.

Religion, Religion, Religion.

UHG!

Matthew Shepard is a true hero to me.

Any person who loses their life for being a homosexual is indeed a true soldier.

Its the only war I'm really interested in fighting.

Homophobia really effects me and many whom I love.

T.R. Knight is also a hero to me. Brave.

In different ways, but hero's nonetheless!

Okay Brian, I get your drift. I salute you for this advocacy of yours. A few notes though:

a. Any person who loses HIS life (not their - which is plural, and your subject - person - is singular)

b. Homophobia really AFFECTS me and many of my loved ones.

Effect, when used as a verb, means to accomplish, as in "Brian's blog effects a change in the Philippine society."

c. In different ways, but a HERO nonetheless.

Hero's is a possessive form, as in "Our hero's blog is called..."

But grammar notwithstanding, keep up the good work.